The Butterfly Lovers; My Poem...

So, we had a speaker today and she asked us to write a poem in response to the Chinese tale of The Butterfly Lovers. What made it more interesting, she asked us to do within about 45 seconds!...I was a little worried, but here's what i came up with...

He is She, or is He

I do not understand

Love could be for you, for me

But not with my brother, a man

He is She, or is He

There's something being concealed

Why compare us to the wife &husband or ducks

if who you say you are is not real

He is She; Yes, isn't She?

What else could all this mean

A sister, a twin, supposedly just like "Him"

Oh, what a fool i've been

So....what do you think??